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Feb 8, 2004 21:23:40 GMT -5
Post by rocklord2004 on Feb 8, 2004 21:23:40 GMT -5
when life has made its final stop
and to the ground you doth flop
will you be thought of as good and true
or will you be thought of something bad
mabey nobody would have a clue
and when your gone not one will be sad
but try not to dwell on this insight
and when it is your time to go
head into the dark with quite a fight
and hope that the end will be slow.
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Feb 8, 2004 21:41:46 GMT -5
Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 8, 2004 21:41:46 GMT -5
... Interisting. Were'd you get that poem from?
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Post by soccermaster on Feb 9, 2004 0:18:50 GMT -5
Not a bad peom. You got anymore?
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Feb 9, 2004 11:42:52 GMT -5
Post by rocklord2004 on Feb 9, 2004 11:42:52 GMT -5
i only post peoms that i write. and i will eventually post more. it just depends on when one pops into my head.
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Feb 9, 2004 13:21:42 GMT -5
Post by Rauru on Feb 9, 2004 13:21:42 GMT -5
LOL And that's how a poem truly starts.
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Feb 9, 2004 13:43:17 GMT -5
Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 9, 2004 13:43:17 GMT -5
 Raru, why won't you put comments on MY poems anymore? Are they not interisting enough for you? Or am I just too dull?
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Feb 9, 2004 13:48:27 GMT -5
Post by Rauru on Feb 9, 2004 13:48:27 GMT -5
I'm sorry I will. No, your poems are awesome. I'm just trying to compliment everybody the best I can. *winks*  *whispers quietly* I like your's the best.  |
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Feb 9, 2004 13:59:34 GMT -5
Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 9, 2004 13:59:34 GMT -5
*blushes and gigles* thanks. Although, they may seem a bit dull, they're all related to the N64 or Game Boy Color Zelda games.
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Feb 9, 2004 14:03:18 GMT -5
Post by Rauru on Feb 9, 2004 14:03:18 GMT -5
Yes that is true, but that's not the reason I like them so much as the person who is actually writing them. |
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Feb 9, 2004 14:17:24 GMT -5
Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 9, 2004 14:17:24 GMT -5
*stares at the celing and blushes* I... uh.... um...
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Nov 28, 2004 0:31:02 GMT -5
Post by renewal on Nov 28, 2004 0:31:02 GMT -5
Wow this sure is an old topic. lol
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Raru, why won't you put comments on MY poems anymore? Are they not interisting enough for you? Or am I just too dull? 
*whispers quietly* I like your's the best. 
