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Post by soccermaster on Feb 5, 2004 23:22:01 GMT -5
Hey I think you huys will like some of my peoms. Here is the first one. Grandpa He's Gone. The Fisherman is gone. His pain is finished, mine is begun. His was the pain ob bodyand limb, Mine is the ache of heart and soul. He is now home with the Lord, God above. I am left wandering with thoughts
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Slade
Stalfos
Slade the Thief
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Post by Slade on Feb 6, 2004 12:51:14 GMT -5
not too bad of a poem. what others do you have?
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Post by soccermaster on Feb 8, 2004 0:25:33 GMT -5
Here we go. Faith
Run the race
Set before your face
You know it makes time
To finish ahead in line.
So keep the faith
During the race
Run with might
During your plight.
Soon it will end
If you will lend
A helping hand to
those passing by
To finish the race
It will take FAITH. |
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Post by Rauru on Feb 8, 2004 1:57:55 GMT -5
Those are some good poems you got there soccermaster. Keep up the good work!  |
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Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 8, 2004 13:32:56 GMT -5
Those are good, but I'm not that interisted with religous stuff. Because once I went to a friend's church with him and his sister, and the people working there were talking about "soul winning" and that faith alone will get you into heaven(and pardon my mouth but I think that's a load of cr@p.)and they were trying to make me join their religon. TThey said if I didn't convert, I'd not go to heaven. I said to them, "If doing good deeds, ananomusly or acknoweldeged, dosen't get you to heaven, then maybe I don't want to be there."
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Post by rocklord2004 on Feb 8, 2004 21:18:11 GMT -5
not trying to start an argument but biblically faith without works is dead. so in other words if you dont do good things and help people and do other things to show your faith what faith do you truly have. therefore true faith alone will get you into heaven. does that make anymore sence to you. if not start a discussion in the general or the fight forums and ill try and clear up what i can with my little brain.
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Post by WanderingStranger on Feb 8, 2004 21:21:26 GMT -5
It's a still-sore topc for me. Let's not speak of it anymone.
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Post by soccermaster on Feb 9, 2004 0:16:02 GMT -5
Here is another. Daddy
There are a million words that I could say,
But I don't know where to start, or how I could ever pay.
You have been that kind of dad, that always kept me going;
You made me a winner, now I keep on rowing.
Never give up and you'll never loose I bet;
Your most inspiring saying is: "Never let the devil see you sweat."
You made me who I am and I'm very proud of that;
I will never be ashamed of you, beacuse you are my dad.
I love the way you wake me up and always make me laugh,
And your ever-present happiness has made an easy path.
Things always seemed so easy; I know it must have been tough,
But God kept on providing for us, so we would have emough.
Because of you I am something, I know I will never fail, For you are my daddy and I know you will never bail.
I hope this explains how much you mean to me,
Never forget you're special; I love you, don't you see. That peom wsa from my heart to my father. That is how I feel about him. He is still alive. |
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Post by renewal on Feb 9, 2004 22:33:10 GMT -5
Those are some pretty nice poems you got there soccermaster.
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Bubbles
Octorok
I may be cute, but i can kick your grASS
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Post by Bubbles on Feb 19, 2004 10:12:52 GMT -5
i love them. i think they all have good intensions behind them. being a poet myself i understand them.
keep up the faith and never give up. keep writing.
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Post by soccermaster on Feb 27, 2004 23:56:39 GMT -5
Thank you very much. You're vain you're oppression
On the flag of our nation.
Your feet has exposed you,
your scheme has foiled. We shall not extinguish.
We shall not exhaust!
We shall expend every
effort to secrue freedom
At any cost. Enimies of freedom,
Look into our eyes
We shall seek and destroy
You, and your lies. |
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