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Post by al'Lan Mandragoran on Dec 18, 2003 13:35:42 GMT -5
At first it was such a simple plan Now it seems a maze Our love, the prize at center
In other words, I'm lost In other words, I'm running I'm trying to find you, so.. In other words, I love you...
I've got my companion I won't keep her waiting we've got rings...pledged hearts.. Eternally together, forever...
Wonderfully innocent kisses Just holding you, so much comfort it feels so right, so good I'll marry you when I get that yes from you...
Oh, yeah, babe... In other words.... I love you...
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Post by renewal on Dec 18, 2003 15:22:45 GMT -5
Again, a very interesting poem. Did you also make this one up yourself to?
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Post by Excel on Dec 18, 2003 16:42:54 GMT -5
Aw, that's very sweet Gannon. I wonder where you do your inspiration from? It's very nice Gannon. I like it. ^^
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Post by al'Lan Mandragoran on Jan 6, 2004 23:49:23 GMT -5
Once again, thank you both. Yes, little one, I came up wth this as well. All poems I'll post are from me, and me alone. Yah....I do miss my girl, tho.
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Post by renewal on Jan 7, 2004 10:48:30 GMT -5
That is cool man. I know I sure wish I could write some good poems. All I usually end up getting, is BLAH!!!
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Post by al'Lan Mandragoran on Jan 27, 2004 22:07:31 GMT -5
Feel what you write man, not write what you feel. that's the secret
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Post by Rauru on Jan 31, 2004 0:18:53 GMT -5
Yes that tiz be true.
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Post by soccermaster on Feb 1, 2004 23:55:14 GMT -5
Great peom Gannon. Post some more so u can see what we all think.
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Post by al'Lan Mandragoran on Feb 14, 2004 20:25:05 GMT -5
Takes time to write good stuff...I'm workin' on it.
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